Broken Wings

Thank you, Myth. :wink: I always look forward to your comments. Seriously, I do. They help very much. :D

The name sounds too similiar to the first book of the Chronicles of Narnia...I suggest you change it.... o-O But I suck at coming up with names so don't look ...

Nice job. Although I cant exactly tell what this is about or where its going (leaves me to think, I have a thought but due to the area of the ...

So I wanted to know, what are angels for you? Angels are spirits that watch over you and care for you. Do you think they are or were human? No, ...

Thank you ^-^ Not much now... >.> I'm still working on it. I'll add more soon, though, so check back!

"I have to be a quick thinker. If not my throat would be open within seconds." -- Naera Yes, I've always thought so. Mama says I got it from Papa. ...

I was not sure whether to put this in action or fantasy, because it is a cross between both.... :? So I ended up putting it in here. Prologue updated ...

First Chapter done! =D

This was good, but I was confused by one bit. 'Where I found myself surprised me more than I would have admitted.' I was confused by the way we suddenly ...

I prefer library, because I like to be able to keep the books I have read and I will be able to enjoy them again without the hassle of getting ...

Oh yea, my English teacher was always saying it's anyway, not you see, it made no effect on me :o And yes, I just read that and it DOES have ...

I fixed it...I think that's what you were trying to say, right? *points to first post* If not, I'm really, very sorry if I'm frustrating you. I can't help that ...

Like I could never live without- I mean; love! Psh, demons can't love! -Naera ~~~~ What type of person WOULD you love?

You don't really have a certain place to stop. You just stop where you think it fits most. Cliffhangers are actually a good thing, because it makes the reader want ...

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